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isaac
2010-03-02
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I think Yuki might program better if her glasses didn't suddenly go opaque every few minutes. Also, I'd love to know what she's staring at in the last panel |
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bankuei 2010-03-02 |
That's a detailed background! Nice use of the clock for time-keeping. |
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Cat
2010-03-03
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The gradient works nicely. Also, how has Yuki procured all those cans of GOD coffee without moving? Does she have a minifridge under her desk or what? |
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Jono 2010-03-03
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No, she got up and got more GOD in between panels. |
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Aaron Smith 2010-03-13 |
Archive BINNNNNNNNGE! | Interesting take on the whole setup. Also: it took me a while to realize that this is "the future!". Not sure how I feel about that. Having done the archive binge! Neat ideas, well laid out, and very interesting use of occasional tradition breaking layouts. I'm glad you didn't go overboard with the tradition breaking though... the "boring 6 panel layout" has a reason why it's persisted so long. Sometimes (even to American sensibilities) things are the way they are because they're good. Your artwork is _clearly_ improving. I'm sure I will dissolve after saying this but "clearly the time off from rpg's has been good for you". YARRRGHBARBLE *steaming hiss* |
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